I think my writing has really improved from some of my first blog posts to my blog posts now. I have really focused on my writing from the beginning of the year to now. I think the piece of writing that really showed me as a writer in the beginning of the year is my Phuket four piece. Because it really shows what I used to be like as a writer and how much I have improved. One of the pieces that show me as a writer now is my Hong Kong Sevens piece. That piece has really showed what I have improved on since my Phuket four blog post. I also have a rubric that I have done to asses my Hong Kong sevens piece of writing. I hope my writing will improve even more from this.